It's cute, but I think you can do better O: ? idk. there's just something. that seems off to me, but i just don't know what it is T_T ..... The hair is nice, I think it may be the face? The lines don't seem smooth. If you add more shading or colours it would be nice too, because it seems flat? (Like to the face and clothing. Some more shading could be added) Do I sound like a jerk? Some people find it rude when I give a critique when it's not asked q ______________q I just want to give feedback for potential improvement.
i mean, usually i would accept critique, but honestly i don't agree? when you say the lines don't seem smooth it's like... they're pixels. i don't know how much more smooth you can get with pixels. i worked on getting the right curves for each line and it looks fine to me. :0 but the shading i agree with. however when i did this i really wanted something simple, which is why i chose to do it with pixels rather than... well, not. so it was kind of intentional, but i'll be adding more shading to future pixels for sure~ thank you uwu
though you really should ask before you give a critique. even though it's to help, artists have the right to deny it. @w@;